Halve the dialogue, keep the information
When to use it
The scene's dialogue is long and explanatory. Delete what the actor does not need to say.
Fill in the variables
Assembled prompt
519Free runs use the fast model and return a short preview (about 300 words). Only the first ~1,000 words of manuscript are read.
How to use this prompt
- 1Fill in the variables
Enter your manuscript, characters or situation in the fields below. The example values are hints.
- 2Check the assembled prompt
The prompt is assembled below with placeholders filled. Edit any rule to fit your work.
- 3Copy it or run it
Copy it into the tool you already use, or run it in SparkLore for a short preview.
- 4Revise the result into your manuscript
The output is a draft. Follow the tips and rewrite half of it by hand.
How to get the most from it
- 'Answer with action' is the biggest win: after 'Are you going?', not 'Yes' but 'She picks up her bag'.
- If more than half went, the scene itself may be unnecessary. Check with the scene-purpose audit.
Use it with
- ScreenplayRewrite an S# scene action-first (less dialogue, more behavior)
A K-drama scene runs on dialogue alone. Let the action lines carry it.
- ScreenplayScene purpose audit: what breaks without it
The script ran long. Test every scene by asking what breaks if it goes.
- RewriteCut 20% without losing meaning
The chapter is over length, or the prose sags.
Use it in the studio with your story bible
Sign up and get full-length results with free credits.
Sign up free and continue