Describe2026-10-04

Action clarity: who, where, what

When to use it

The fight or chase is flashy but readers lose track of where everyone is.

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Action scene{{manuscript}}

Assembled prompt

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Rewrite the action scene below for clarity.
Rules:
- Every paragraph's first sentence contains who + where (distance and direction relative to the opponent).
- One action per sentence. No 'while doing X, did Y'.
- One simile in the whole scene, maximum.
- Slow time with one short sentence right before the decisive blow.
- By the end, each character's position and condition is clear in prose (not a list).
- Length within ±10% of the original. Output only the text.

[Manuscript]
[Action scene]

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Revise the result into your manuscript
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How to get the most from it

Action is the literature of position. If you can draw a map while reading the result, it worked.
The 'no while-doing' rule is the highest-leverage one; try it outside action scenes too.

Use it in the studio with your story bible

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